This Summer Learning Journey activity I have done today which is commenting on a persons SLJ’s blog post. In a quality comment, we first need to greet them (e.g. Greetings, hello or you can use your cultural greeting). Next you would need to write something thoughtful about their work they have published, and after that you can ask a question or give feed back to them, to help improve their work.
I have commented on Te Raumati’s grand design blog post. You can visit her blog here: https://pbsteraumatis.edublogs.org/2022/12/17/summer-learning-journey-week-1-activity-9-grand-design/
Kia ora Chisa,
It’s Simon here from the Summer Learning Journey team 👋
This is such a quality, thoughtful and positive comment you have left on Te Raumati’s blog post. It’s really great to see you are spreading positivity and good vibes with your comment. Ka pai! 😀
What are you looking forward to doing the most over summer?
Ngā mihi,
Simon (SLJ)
Kia Ora Simon,
Thank you for commenting on my Summer Learning Journey Blog Post! Something I am looking forward to doing the most over this summer is going out on sunny days, and hoping for no bad weather until the holiday finishes!
How about you? What is something you are looking forward to this summer?
You’re welcome, Chisa.
I too am hoping we have nice weather over summer because what I’m looking forward to the most is swimming in the ocean. It’s kind of a goal to do it a lot. I didn’t do much of it last summer.